Crime, justice and vigilantism. Over on Catriona King's website this week, you'll find me talking about my novel, Sudden Vengeance.
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Monday, 25 August 2014
Tuesday, 10 June 2014
Writing anatomy lesson – ‘the same scenes kept replaying’
This chapter is
designed to highlight the plight of the victim. The public’s perception of the
justice system is that it doesn’t care about the victims. Criminals without
remorse don’t care, that’s certain. My final excerpt is from Chapter 3.
Geoff wasn’t coming back. He’d been taken from her, killed by a callous lout who thrust his fist in the air when he was acquitted.
She was still relatively young, with plenty of life in front of her, yet the years ahead that had offered so much promise now threatened to be empty, sad and bitter.
Larry instinctively let go of the DVD recorder at once, trying to reach his assailant behind him.
The recorder, only suspended on the wire round Larry’s neck, slammed into his thighs and groin. A gloved hand wrenched Larry’s face round and rammed it twice into the bole of the tree. Nose streaming blood, his breathing cut short by the wire, he collapsed at the tree’s base.
Frank faltered and his face went pale. He turned and dashed towards the van.
Mr. Terry Pryce, 19, charged with manslaughter,
was acquitted today. Mrs. Michelle Boynton, 38, the widow of the man Pryce was
accused of killing, broke down when she heard the verdict.
Last June Mr. Geoff Boynton, 42, objected to
Pryce damaging his garden fence with a screwdriver. Pryce allegedly became
abusive and stabbed Mr. Boynton in the chest five times. Mrs. Boynton beat off
Pryce with a garden rake and later identified him.
After today’s verdict, Mrs. Boynton’s solicitor
stated that they would “consider a civil action or other alternatives to get
justice”.
– The
Alverbank Chronicle
Michelle Boynton sat
in front of the gas fire, watching with unseeing eyes the antics of the
characters in Coronation Street. They’d always preferred the northern soap to the gloom and doom of Eastenders. She could hear Geoff’s deep laughter echoing,
it seemed, from his empty chair. The clock ticked reassuringly on the
mantelpiece. Even after all this time, the same scenes kept replaying in her
mind; stark, frightening, yet unreal. And also the might-have-beens, the
alternatives if only Geoff hadn’t felt protective towards his property, their
home. Guilt stabbed her in the heart, as it often did when she woke in the
early hours of the morning.
In the blue light from
the television set, her plain features appeared attractive, the high cheekbones
pronounced with shadows, her big eyes glistening, reflecting the red of the
fire. But there was nobody to see her. The curtains were drawn, and there was
no one to caress her curling, shoulder-length red hair.
Tears rolled over her
cheeks, but she didn’t notice them. Before that terrible day in June, when life
was normal, she had been amused by the soap opera, her thick lips broadening
into a laugh. But the nights were no longer normal. They probably never would
be, ever again.
Michelle’s stomach
rumbled emptily. Apart from toast at breakfast, she hadn’t eaten all day.
As the advertisements
came on, she got up, walked into the kitchen and put on the kettle.
There was a dull ache,
deep in her heart, and no Rennies would ease it. She rubbed her chest idly
while waiting for the water to boil.
Automatically, she put
out two mugs – labelled ‘Geoff’ and ‘Michelle’. She spooned the coffee into
both. Only at the point of pouring the water onto the granules did she realise
her mistake.
Geoff wasn’t coming back. He’d been taken from her, killed by a callous lout who thrust his fist in the air when he was acquitted.
Michelle lowered the
kettle and clutched Geoff’s mug to her breast.
She was still relatively young, with plenty of life in front of her, yet the years ahead that had offered so much promise now threatened to be empty, sad and bitter.
She sat at the kitchen
table and lowered the mug, then covered her face with her hands and wept.
***
Larry Dawson and Frank
Ricketts carried the DVD recorder between them, the cable with the plug draped
round Larry’s neck. Even devoid of leaves, a broad sycamore tree by the double
garden gate still cast deep shadows over them. Nearby was a pile of sand and
brick rubble from a half-completed house extension. Frank’s Commer van was
parked a few yards further down the Crescent.
“Have we got time to
go back, d’you reckon?” whispered Frank, his breath visible in the night air.
“Nah, I did a quick
check and there ain’t nothin’ else worth pinchin’.” Larry was older and thicker
set than eighteen-year-old Frank, and liked to bathe in the youth’s adulation.
“Stick to what you know you can get rid of, Frankie.”
Suddenly a black shape
emerged from behind the tree, grabbed the wire round Larry’s neck and twisted
and tightened it. “I think you should put that machine back, don’t you?” said
the stranger.
Larry instinctively let go of the DVD recorder at once, trying to reach his assailant behind him.
Frank fumbled and let
go of the machine, and barked, “Hey! Who the–?”
The recorder, only suspended on the wire round Larry’s neck, slammed into his thighs and groin. A gloved hand wrenched Larry’s face round and rammed it twice into the bole of the tree. Nose streaming blood, his breathing cut short by the wire, he collapsed at the tree’s base.
Frank faltered and his face went pale. He turned and dashed towards the van.
Their assailant
released a bolas from a waist fastening, twirled it overhead then let go.
The weighted sections
of rope flew after Frank and wrapped around his legs, tripping him up.
“Christ!” Frank fell
headfirst into the gutter. As he struggled to unravel the rope, his attacker
ran up. Heart hammering, pounding, all Frank could see was the whites of eyes
in the black-mask of a face. The punch when it came was surprisingly swift and
knocked him senseless.
Their van contained a
phone – all the mod cons at their victims’ expense. The stranger in black
called the police, gave the address of the break-in, and hung up.
Their assailant then emptied some sand into
the van’s oil-sump and quickly melted into the darkness.
A short while later,
the police patrol found Frank and Larry tied to the tree. Labels from a
hand-held printer were stuck to a pre-printed card and pinned to Larry’s chest:
These two men burgled 4 Waterside Crescent. The DVD recorder has their
fingerprints on it. Handle with care. The Black Knight. In the bottom corner of the card was a black
silhouette of a knight with a shield and sword.
***
As this is a crime novel, it seems likely
that certain individuals will swear. I rationed the strong swearing to four
instances.
I’ve deliberately not referred to the
vigilante as either ‘he’ or ‘she’ at this stage, which presents its own minor
problems in description, since I want the scene to be visual to the reader.
[When an author writes about an individual whose identity is a secret and it’s
daylight without shadows, I wonder how they’d film that. The actor’s face would
be visible – unless it was always a back view…]
***
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Tuesday, 20 May 2014
The vigilante through history – a brief view
Sudden Vengeance is about a vigilante – male or female, you'll learn which eventually – who metes
out some kind of justice against the guilty when it is widely perceived that
the law has ‘gone soft’ on criminals.
Released on good behaviour today -
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The Great Hanging at Gainesville - Wikipedia commons
In Hampshire, England (where Sudden Vengeance is set!), during 2006, a vigilante slashed the tyres of more than twenty cars, leaving a note made from cut-out newsprint stating "Warning: you have been seen while using your mobile phone". Driving whilst using a mobile is a criminal offence in the UK, since individuals using their mobiles while driving have caused death and serious injury, but critics feel the law is little observed or enforced.
On April 15, 2011 a group of women in Cherán armed with rocks and fireworks attacked a bus carrying illegal loggers armed with machine guns in Michoacán associated with the Mexican drug cartel La Familia Michoacana. They assumed control over the town, expelled the police force and blocked roads leading to oak timber on a nearby mountain. Vigilante activity has spread to the nearby community of Opopeo. The government of Mexico has recognized Cherán as a self-governing indigenous community, but criminals continue to murder residents in the forest.
There are many more examples.
The following is extracted
from a lengthy and interesting article about vigilantes through history. It
can be found here
Briefly, vigilantism has often been espoused by folkloric heroes and
legendary outlaws (e.g., Robin Hood being the most obvious example).
Vigilantism in literature, folklore and legend is connected to the fundamental
issues of dissatisfied morality, injustice, the perceived failures of authority and the ethical adequacy of
legitimate governance.
Not all vigilantism is aimed at the bad guys, though. It’s
all in the perceptions of the aggrieved, and that of course is the danger. And there are documented instances where mistaken
identity has meant the death of innocents. Here are some examples, the good and
the bad, perhaps, from Wikipedia:
In 1858 San Luis Obispo vigilantes ended the murderous reign of the
bandit gang of Pío Linares on El Camino Real between San Luis and Santa Barbara.
In October 1862 in northern Texas, several Unionist sympathizers were
arrested and taken to Gainesville, Texas for trial on charges of treason and
insurrection. Seven were tried and hanged, and 14 were hanged without trial. A
few weeks later, Unionist sympathizers were hanged without trial across
northern Texas. Known as "The Great Hanging at Gainesville", it may
have been the deadliest act of vigilante violence in U.S. history.
In 1865, the Ku Klux Klan was formed in Pulaski,
Tennessee by a group of six Confederate War veterans. The KKK or "Klan"
sought to use extralegal force to resist Reconstruction in the post-Civil War
South of the United States. The KKK became a leading agent of racist violence
in the US.
In the early 20th century, the White Finns founded the Protection Corps
as a paramilitary vigilante organisation in Finland. It formed the nucleus of
the White Army in the Finnish Civil War (January-May, 1918).
In the 1920s, the Big Sword Society of China protected life and property
in a state of anarchy.
The Guardian Angels organization was founded February 13, 1979 in New
York City by Curtis Sliwa and has chapters in 15 countries and 144 cities
around the world.
Recognized since the 1980s, Sombra Negra
or "Black Shadow" of El Salvador is a group of mostly retired police
officers and military personnel whose sole duty is to cleanse the country of
"impure" social elements by killing criminals and gang members. Along
with several other organizations, Sombra Negra are a remnant of the death
squads from the civil war of the 1970s and 1980s.
In Hampshire, England (where Sudden Vengeance is set!), during 2006, a vigilante slashed the tyres of more than twenty cars, leaving a note made from cut-out newsprint stating "Warning: you have been seen while using your mobile phone". Driving whilst using a mobile is a criminal offence in the UK, since individuals using their mobiles while driving have caused death and serious injury, but critics feel the law is little observed or enforced.
On April 15, 2011 a group of women in Cherán armed with rocks and fireworks attacked a bus carrying illegal loggers armed with machine guns in Michoacán associated with the Mexican drug cartel La Familia Michoacana. They assumed control over the town, expelled the police force and blocked roads leading to oak timber on a nearby mountain. Vigilante activity has spread to the nearby community of Opopeo. The government of Mexico has recognized Cherán as a self-governing indigenous community, but criminals continue to murder residents in the forest.
There are many more examples.
***
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Monday, 19 May 2014
'Instil fear in black uncaring hearts!’
Some of the background
to my crime novel Sudden Vengeance is
based on real crime reports in local newspapers in UK. Needless to say, the
names have been changed. You might detect a trend – crimes against property
tend to warrant more severe punishment. These snippets are relevant to the
story; they might go some way to explain why somebody would consider becoming a
vigilante, in order to obtain justice on behalf of victims. It’s a big moral
question, posed more than once in the novel.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
Embezzler Jailed
Keith Stewart, 43, a computer analyst-programmer at HBT Inc, Southampton, admitted embezzling £40,000 from the company. He was found guilty and sentenced to 10 years in prison.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
Rape Hoaxer Guilty
Bethany Harmon, 26, was today found guilty of blackmail. She made a practice of obtaining lifts from lone men and, once in the car, she cried rape unless the driver paid up. Judge Franks said, “Your actions are wantonly despicable and I have no option but to set an example of you.” She was given a prison sentence of 15 years.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
– The Alverbank Chronicle.
The Vigilante – Right Or Wrong?
The vigilante is not new in this country. They were around long before Robin Hood. We know why people turn to vigilantism: they see their world falling prey to anarchy; they feel the establishment cannot hold back the tide of evil. The forces of law and order will say that people cannot take the law into their own hands, for that way truly lies anarchy. Yet those who espouse the vigilante’s cause might argue that since the law enforcers are incapable of applying the law sensibly, then someone else must do it.
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News reports from the book:
Shocking Death
An old age pensioner,
80, was robbed and badly beaten in her ground floor warden-controlled flat.
Mrs. Dorothy Monk was declared dead on arrival at the Queen Alexandra Hospital.– The Alverbank Chronicle
‘Justice denied’
Mr. Terry Pryce, 19,
charged with manslaughter, was acquitted today. Mrs. Michelle Boynton, 38, the
widow of the man Pryce was accused of killing, broke down when she heard the
verdict.
Last June Mr. Geoff
Boynton, 42, objected to Pryce damaging his garden fence with a screwdriver.
Pryce allegedly became abusive and stabbed Mr. Boynton in the chest five times.
Mrs. Boynton beat off Pryce with a garden rake and later identified him.
After today’s verdict,
Mrs. Boynton’s solicitor stated that they would “consider a civil action or
other alternatives to get justice”.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
Youth Let Off
Judge
Wallside dismissed the case against Steven Campion, 17, charged with sexually
assaulting his neighbour’s
six-year-old girl. “I understand that while you babysat, the girl was
provocative in her nightdress,” the judge said.
The parents of the
child intend to appeal.
A Child Protection
Agency spokeswoman said, “This sends out entirely the wrong signals. The
judge’s comments were wholly inappropriate.”
– The Alverbank
ChronicleEmbezzler Jailed
Keith Stewart, 43, a computer analyst-programmer at HBT Inc, Southampton, admitted embezzling £40,000 from the company. He was found guilty and sentenced to 10 years in prison.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
Rape Hoaxer Guilty
Bethany Harmon, 26, was today found guilty of blackmail. She made a practice of obtaining lifts from lone men and, once in the car, she cried rape unless the driver paid up. Judge Franks said, “Your actions are wantonly despicable and I have no option but to set an example of you.” She was given a prison sentence of 15 years.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
Vandals Blamed For Heart Attack
Mr. Fred Testcombe,
71, died of a heart attack yesterday when he discovered his allotment had been
vandalised. His wife, Doris, has been inconsolable. Their neighbour, Mrs.
Bessie Evans, 62, of Hardy Close, said that Mr. Testcombe “considered the
allotment his pride and joy. He took up gardening for therapy reasons after a
bad heart attack some years ago. It’s been a terrible shock to Doris. Whoever
did this ought to be horse-whipped.” – The Alverbank Chronicle.
The Vigilante – Right Or Wrong?
The vigilante is not new in this country. They were around long before Robin Hood. We know why people turn to vigilantism: they see their world falling prey to anarchy; they feel the establishment cannot hold back the tide of evil. The forces of law and order will say that people cannot take the law into their own hands, for that way truly lies anarchy. Yet those who espouse the vigilante’s cause might argue that since the law enforcers are incapable of applying the law sensibly, then someone else must do it.
But what drives this
latest manifestation? What motivates The Black Knight? Has he suffered the
tragic death of his parents at the hands of some criminal, some drunken driver?
Perhaps he is consciously using a similar trademark name to those gaudy
characters featured in violent American comics. Yet the pleasant south-coast
town of Alverbank is no Gotham, surely?
Whatever his reasons
for taking on this guise, he is intriguing. We are going to hear a great deal
more from him.
A police spokesperson,
who wishes to remain anonymous, states that the criminal fraternity is anxious
about this vigilante. They want him caught, “before he kills somebody.” Me, I
hope he stays loose, to instil fear in those black uncaring hearts!
– The Alverbank
Chronicle Comment
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20 May 2014
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Sunday, 18 May 2014
Vigilante justice is good justice!
SUDDEN VENGEANCE
Nik Morton
(Published by Crooked Cat Publishing on 20 May
2014)
Vigilante justice is good justice!
PROLOGUE
NO ROOM FOR SELF-WORTH
SUNDAY
It was bitterly cold –
a bloody night to remember, Janice Beaverstock thought as she ran across the
cobbles of upmarket Spitbank Mews. The only sound was the clacking of her
strapless high-heels. Steaming wisps of breath feathered the air. Heart
hammering, she glanced over her shoulder, and her stomach churned with fear and
anger.
The bastard stood at his upstairs
window, the bedroom light a yellow frame for his large bulky silhouette. Then,
with a contemptuous shrug of big shoulders, he turned away and drew the
curtains, cutting off the light though not the images, not the pain.
She leaned against the brick wall of
a townhouse and pulled the torn blouse over her cut breasts. Tears streaming,
she moved on and walked unsteadily round the corner, thankfully out of sight of
the swine’s flat.
Even though every pace was agony,
Janice ran. Sticky blood seeped through her tight green skirt, where her
buttocks had been brutally lashed with his whip.
His words throbbed in her head,
wouldn’t go away: “When you sit down, you’ll remember me. The pain will remind
you.”
Get help, she
thought. Witnesses, the Samaritans – anybody! But she had no proof, nothing.
She was a known prostitute. Who’d believe her word against his? Besides, he
could blackmail her, make things worse for Jamie.
Swallow your pride, Janice told
herself and laughed, though not with mirth. Pride? What the hell was that,
anyway? It sure as hell didn’t put food in your belly or clothes on your back.
She’d learned long ago, if you wanted the good things in life, selling your
body was one way to make it happen. Some of the things her customers asked of
her left no room for self-worth, let alone pride. Only the money mattered.
Jamie didn’t like it but he understood. Jamie had pride, the stupid fool. And that
had landed him in the clink.
She slowed to a slightly less
painful walk. She knew that the scars would heal. In time.
***
Moving away from the
window, a satisfied smile played on her persecutor’s thick lips.
The room now plunged in darkness, he
pointed the remote control and the portable television screen on top of the MFI
bedside drawers flickered into life.
After a moment, the hidden video
camera revealed his bedroom. He was in his Y-fronts and vest, Janice was only
wearing her black frilly panties. The sound was not good but he heard his
mumbled, “Is it okay if I do it with you tied up?”
She shrugged, slipping out of her
panties, and said, “Whatever turns you on, love.”
Licking his thick lips, he crouched
entranced by the images on the television. He watched himself tie Janice
face-down to the bed. The thrill of expectancy ran through him all over again
and he was aroused.
Then he watched himself on the
screen as he slowly removed the leather whip from the top bedside drawer.
He stabbed the freeze button.
The look of abject horror on her
face was exquisite! Oh, yes, indeed. Exquisite!
CHAPTER 1
LIKE SOME CANCEROUS MAGGOT
SHOCKING DEATH
An old age pensioner, 80, was robbed and badly beaten in her ground
floor warden-controlled flat. Mrs. Dorothy Monk was declared dead on arrival at
the Queen Alexandra Hospital.
– The Alverbank Chronicle
MONDAY
About twenty mourners,
mostly dressed in black, clustered around the newly-dug grave at the rear of
the graveyard. His ecclesiastical robes flapped in the wind as the minister
stood at the head of the yawning black oblong hole in the ground. A few women
held onto their black-veiled hats. The Knight family huddled together around
the coffin that rested on wooden slats, clasping their coats against the cold
insistent wind, attempting to retain body heat. It seemed as if in that same
action they were also trying to contain swelling anger and hate.
The Norman church and graveyard overlooked the beautiful wide Alver
estuary. White wings of seagulls flashed in the bruised blue winter sky and, as
if in reflection, white sails, boosted by a chill wind from Siberia, scudded
across the harbour waters. The cries of the birds were shrill, giving voice to
the ache that seemed to hover here. Cypress boughs snaked, offering shade to a
few final resting places. Several yew trees – almost the essential complement
of churchyards – were of advanced age; symbols not of the end of life but of
its continuance in the resurrection to come. Many of the gravestones were weather-beaten
and illegible, or cracked with the incursions of ivy and bindweed, while a
handful of others seemed relatively new. There were several headstones with
military insignia chiselled into their marble surfaces.
Cold wind brushed Paul Knight’s cheek and made him blink. The tears he’d
held back until now finally started their downward course. Self-consciously, he
wiped them away with a large-boned hand and looked around, but nobody was
paying him any attention.
Family and friends were all intent on the vicar and his words. Not that
Paul was ashamed of crying for Gran, but he felt that as a police constable of
four years’ seniority he should set a good example. “An old head on young
shoulders,” Gran always said. And, at twenty-two, he was the eldest. After all,
he had attended some scenes of crime where no amount of tears would wash away
the horror.
That was it, he supposed: the horror of Gran’s sudden death.
Some bugger had broken into her neat little flat and panicked when she
discovered him pocketing her few valuables. The cowardly bastard knocked her to
the floor and beat her over the head with an heirloom candlestick. He escaped
while she crawled to her alarm button. Gran died in the ambulance.
Judging by Gran’s latest cash withdrawal entry in her TSB passbook, the
bastard got away with about ten quid – and a couple of silver picture frames
and her jewels. He’d left fingerprints and a sole imprint in the soil outside
her kitchen window, the distinctive marks of a Nike Air Max running shoe. There
was no description of the assailant to work on and the stolen items had not
turned up at any of the usual outlets, either the fence in Alverbank High
Street or the various local car boot sales.
Paul remembered Gran’s tearful joy when all those years ago he gave her
a brooch he’d bought with his paper-round money. He must have been about ten or
eleven. It was only base metal, with coloured glass masquerading as her
birthday stones, amethysts. But to hear her reminisce about it, the gift could
have been the crown jewels. She’d worn the brooch often.
The thief was not discerning; he’d taken the fake brooch as well as the
real jewellery, probably to finance a drug habit.
A good guess, drugs: the dabs had tallied with the Lloyds Chemist
break-in last month. But as the druggie had no criminal record, there was no
way to trace him.
When Paul revealed these facts to the family, they’d been both appalled
and disillusioned.
Gran had moved to Sunnydale House at the family’s insistence, because
they thought she’d be safe there. Christ, nobody was safe these days!
Gulls shrieked, as if echoing his anguish…
When justice fails, a vigilante steps forward
In
the broken Britain of today, faith in the police is faltering. Justice and
fairness are flouted. Victims are not seen as hurt people but simply as
statistics.
Paul’s
family is but one example of those victims of unpunished criminals. In the
English south coast town of Alverbank, many others are damaged and grieving. It
cannot go on. There has to be a response, some way of fighting back.
A
vigilante soon emerges and delivers rough justice, breaking the bones and
cracking the heads of those guilty individuals who cause pain without remorse.
Who
is the vigilante? He – or she – is
called the Black Knight. The police warn against taking ‘the law into your own
hands’.
But
the press laud the vigilante’s efforts and respond: ‘What law?’
Will
the Black Knight eventually cross the line and kill?
Paul and his family seem involved and they are going
to suffer…
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Tuesday, 13 May 2014
A week to go… and Vengeance will be mine
I
know, it’s almost a steal from Mickey Spillane’s book title, Vengeance is Mine! (1950) – the third
Mike Hammer novel. The exclamation mark is Spillane’s though it doesn't always appear on the cover.
And of course he borrowed it from the Bible – ‘Vengeance is mine, sayeth the Lord, and I will repay.’ (Romans 12:19)
Paul’s family is but one example of those victims of unpunished criminals. In the English south coast town of Alverbank, many others are damaged and grieving. It cannot go on. There has to be a response, some way of fighting back.
A vigilante soon emerges and delivers rough justice, breaking the bones and cracking the heads of those guilty individuals who cause pain without remorse.
Who is the vigilante? He – or she – is called the Black Knight. The police warn against taking ‘the law into your own hands’. But the press laud the vigilante’s efforts and respond: ‘What law?’
Will the Black Knight eventually cross the line and kill?
Paul and his family seem involved and they are going to suffer…
[This book is an improved reprint of A Sudden Vengeance Waits, previously out-of-print]
Please watch this space for further announcements about Sudden Vengeance (without the exclamation mark!)
And of course he borrowed it from the Bible – ‘Vengeance is mine, sayeth the Lord, and I will repay.’ (Romans 12:19)
Two
other variations crop up in the good book:
‘To
me belongeth vengeance, and recompense; their foot shall slide in due time: for
the day of their calamity is at hand, and the things that shall come upon them
make haste.’ (Deuteronomy 32:35)
And
Hebrews 10:30 more or less reiterates Deuteronomy.
It’s
a popular quotation employed as a book title, although I'd guess that in every case the
vengeance isn’t left to God but to the books’ characters.
My
book, Sudden Vengeance, published on
20 May by Crooked Cat Publishing gets its title from an Alexander Pope poem, Elegy to the Memory of an Unfortunate Lady
(1717); he wrote: ‘On all the line a sudden vengeance waits, And frequent
hearses shall besiege your gates.’ This poem also has the line, ‘Is it, in heav’n,
a crime to love too well?’ which has cropped up a few times too, certainly as
an earlier variant in Shakespeare’s Othello,
Act 5, scene 2 – ‘loved not wisely, but too well…’
Here’s
a quotation from Sudden Vengeance:
Joe
Rothwell was known as a drunken bully throughout the entire neighbourhood of
Spithead Estate. He was about five-ten in his rank-smelling socks, sported a
perpetual five-o’clock shadow, and his belt-overhanging belly advertised his
liking for Whitbread beer.
Nobody usually looked into his dull
brown eyes for more than a fleeting second, because he was prone to take
offence, exclaiming, “What-you-starin’-at?” just before his fists flailed out.
But if anyone had been brave or foolhardy enough to look into Joe Rothwell’s
eyes, they would have glimpsed, deep within, a hurt and frightened child.
Perhaps the elfin Irene had managed
to fathom these depths when they were courting. Possibly he appealed to her
mothering instinct, which in her plain timidity she interpreted as love. The
unplanned pregnancy and her ex-boxer father precipitated their marriage and,
shortly after the birth of their son, Justin, and the fatal brain-haemorrhage
of Irene’s dad, Joe took to the bottle with a vengeance.
From Justin’s birthday on, for the
last eight years, Joe beat Irene for the slightest perceived transgression in
his booze-fogged brain.
Fortunately, their son avoided Joe’s
violent outbursts, even though he often unwittingly caused them. Irene took the
brunt intended for her child.
Friends and neighbours pleaded with
Irene to leave Joe. Yet it was easier said than done. Since she was seventeen,
she’d been emotionally tied to him. The house was rented. She had no money of
her own, no work experience, and no relatives to fall back upon. And she had an
eight-year-old child to consider. She’d stick it out. Things might improve. But
in her heart she feared one day soon he would kill her.
Recovering consciousness, Joe felt
dizzy, the blood rushing to his head. The pain in his skull made him nauseous.
He opened his eyes and vomited, spluttering and spitting, the vile outpourings
spreading all over his face and up his nose.
Christ, I’m upside down!
Coughing, squinting through wet
lids, he realised his arms were tied behind his back. He shivered with the
cold, which was not surprising as he was naked, suspended from a pedestrian
overpass on the Spithead Estate.
It was still night, the few
streetlamps that had survived vandalism offering a weak yellow glow. Night. Now
he remembered. He’d been stumbling home from the pub when a dark shape loomed
up in front of him. Then blackness, nothing...
His ankles ached with the weight of
his body. One leg seemed numb. His heart hammered as he worried about his circulation.
Didn’t gangrene set in or something if you–?
“Hello, Joe.” On the grassy
embankment alongside the flyover was the same black figure, arms folded, the
trilby cocked over the brow, shadows concealing the face.
***
So,
it would seem Irene had loved unwisely and too well. The black figure is a
vigilante who doesn’t take kindly to wife-beaters. The book blurb reads:
When justice
fails, a vigilante steps forward
In
the broken Britain of today, faith in the police is faltering. Justice and
fairness are flouted. Victims are not seen as hurt people but simply as
statistics.
Paul’s family is but one example of those victims of unpunished criminals. In the English south coast town of Alverbank, many others are damaged and grieving. It cannot go on. There has to be a response, some way of fighting back.
A vigilante soon emerges and delivers rough justice, breaking the bones and cracking the heads of those guilty individuals who cause pain without remorse.
Who is the vigilante? He – or she – is called the Black Knight. The police warn against taking ‘the law into your own hands’. But the press laud the vigilante’s efforts and respond: ‘What law?’
Will the Black Knight eventually cross the line and kill?
Paul and his family seem involved and they are going to suffer…
[This book is an improved reprint of A Sudden Vengeance Waits, previously out-of-print]
Please watch this space for further announcements about Sudden Vengeance (without the exclamation mark!)
Thursday, 3 June 2010
It's about victims, not statistics
I'm pleased to reveal that my modern vigilante novel, A Sudden Vengeance Waits, set in the fictitious town of Alverbank on the south coast of Hampshire has been accepted by Solstice Publishing. The title comes from a poem by Alexander Pope.
The blurb may be something like this: What conditions create a vigilante? Is it a personal tragedy, the loss of a loved one, or the frustration over the inadequacies of current law enforcement? In the broken Britain of today, the Knight family attends the funeral of Gran, killed by a burglar. But the Knights aren’t the only victims of unpunished criminals. There are plenty of others hurt and grieving in the south coast town of Alverbank. It’s about victims, not statistics. The vigilante breaks bones and cracks heads of those guilty individuals who cause pain without remorse.Who is the vigilante? He – or she – is called the Black Knight. Will the Black Knight eventually cross the line and kill? Somehow, the Knight family seems involved and is going to suffer.
The excellent atmospheric cover shown here was produced by Solstice in a matter of two days. The editing and publication process will however take a little longer...!
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