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Tuesday, 23 January 2018

Mule women die in stampede


The border between the Spanish enclave of Ceuta and Morocco [in North Africa] is daily crossed by female porters who carry large loads, some often heavier than their own weight, strapped to their backs. They are called ‘mule women’ or ‘hamalat’.  

Last week, two such women in their forties – Ilham and Souad – were crushed in a stampede of fellow porters.

While it’s difficult to corroborate figures, it is estimated that between 4,000 and 15,000 female porters use the route each day. These human mules are impoverished and carry the loads to earn a pittance.



More details can be found in my book Catacomb (pp36-37); these ‘mule ladies’ also work between the Spanish enclave of Melilla and Morocco:

“Before the 1990s there was no serious border between Morocco and Melilla. Then, membership of the EU meant that Spain was expected to strengthen its border controls. So now a few hundred million euros’ worth of goods arrive in Melilla’s port each year,” Abdel explained. “And the women are used to avoid import taxes because any package that is hand-carried in to Morocco is considered as luggage and therefore duty-free.” (p36)

Catacomb (published by Crooked Cat Books, 2015). Paperback and e-book available here


Tuesday, 27 September 2016

'...wry and witty, well observed, and fast paced.'

A big thank you to Rowena Hoseason of murdermayhemandmore.net for her review of Catalyst. It's interesting that both she and Jack Owen (see yesterday's blog) refer in their reviews to Emma Peel from The Avengers TV series. Maybe there was some subconscious tribute working there when I created the character, since I was in my formative years when I watched that highly original ground-breaking series in the 1960s!

Here is the Amazon review; a slightly longer review can be found at Rowena's site (above):

Catherine is a talented woman. Smart enough to be a biochemist. Beautiful enough to be a top-class catwalk model. Physically skilled and strong enough to free-climb a sleek city office block. Determined enough to avenge the financial ruin and deaths of her parents. Yup, she’s a thoroughly modern girl.

But Cat is also a wonderful throwback to Emma Peel of The Avengers TV series. Indeed, the whole atmosphere of Catalyst is resoundingly retro and it shares a lot of style with The Avengers and The Saint, and even the early Bond movies.  

Catalyst is not a pastiche nor a parody but feels instead like a loving tribute to the sensibilities and sly humour of those 1960s spy series. Yet it’s most definitely set in the 21st century and it doesn’t lampoon its influences so much as cherish them.

There’s a coherent plot to push the action along, one which touches on animal rights, science running amok, corporate abuses of the environment and human trafficking alongside good old-fashioned love, jealously, betrayal, intrigue and, of course, murder. The writing is straightforward and easy to follow, although occasionally it gets bogged down a little bit in everyday minutiae.

Author Nik Morton can deliver a gripping action set piece; the opening sequence involving Cat’s incredible climb is outright excellent and skilfully pulls the reader straight into the fray.

I particularly enjoyed: the role reversal which gleefully subverts gender stereotypes and sees the leading man tied helpless to railway track (yes, really), relying on the all-action heroine to come to his aid.

I was also intrigued by the police officers who follow Cat's path as it zigzags across the UK and onwards to Spain. One of them is known as ‘Inspector Mushroom’ because he only comes out after dark – can’t wait for that back-story to be explained in a future episode. In fact, he’s such an interesting character that he probably deserves a spin-off story all of his own.

Catalyst made for an enjoyable afternoon’s light-hearted entertainment. It’s wry and witty, well observed, and fast paced. The violence and intimate action all leans towards the delicate end of the scale so there’s nothing here to shock or horrify. Good, old fashioned fun, in fact. Steed would certainly approve.



Note: I was very pleased that Rowena picked up on the two NCA characters, Pointer and Basset, 'the dogs of law'. Yes, Pointer's strange origin is explained in the prologue of Catacomb!



Catalyst can be obtained from Amazon sites worldwide.

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Paperback trilogy - the cat's meow...



  • Three exciting paperback action romantic adventures featuring ‘the avenging Cat’! 
  •  With superb uniform covers from Crooked Cat Publishing.


Catalyst - £7.99

Kindle also available – (series introductory bargain!) - £0.86

Catacomb - £5.99

Kindle - £2.58

Cataclysm - £6.99

Kindle - £2.58

Other e-book formats are also available.

CATALYST
The Avenging Cat series #1
Catalyst: a person that precipitates events.
That's Catherine Vibrissae. Orphan. Chemist. Model. Avenging Cat. She seeks revenge against Loup Malefice, the man responsible for the takeover of her father's company. An accomplished climber, Cat is not averse to breaking and entering to confound her enemies. Ranging from south of England to the north-east, Wales and Barcelona, Cat's quest for vengeance is implacable. But with the NCA hot on her tail, can she escape the clutches of sinister Zabala and whip-wielding Profesora Quesada?

CATACOMB
The Avenging Cat series #2
Catacomb: a subterranean cemetery: a place where ancient corpses are found – or new ones are dumped.
After their recent success in Barcelona, Cat and Rick continue their vendetta against Loup Malefice and his global company, Cerberus, penetrating the lair of Petra Grimalkin in Nice. But death stalks the pair, as do the dogs of law from the NCA, Basset and Pointer. Cat’s trail of vengeance next leads to the Cerberus health food processing plant in the Maghreb. She puts her skills to good use in Morocco where she again confronts the psychotic killer, Zabala. From the exotic streets of Tangier to the inhospitable High Atlas Mountains, danger lurks and a deadly ambush awaits…

CATACLYSM

The Avenging Cat series #3
Cataclysm:  a political or social upheaval
Some months after their adventure in Morocco, Catherine Vibrissae receives devastating news from Rick – news that will change her life. Still determined to go to Shanghai to face down her arch enemy Malefice and end her vendetta once and for all, she thwarts an ambush by Cerberus’ head of security, Mr Soong. To complicate matters, oligarch and people smuggler Belofsky is in Shanghai with his own agenda. While Cat plays cat-and-mouse with Soong, she uncovers a conspiracy that could lead to war between China and Japan


Wednesday, 13 April 2016

An enjoyable romp

Today, I just spotted a new review for Cataclysm, #3 in the 'Avenging Cat' series, on Amazon.com.

It seems that Cat has at least one fan out there.

So, thank you 'Stuart' for the purchase - and this review:

As before our intrepid, free climbing, former fashion-model heroine is in pursuit of the baddest of bad guys, Loup Malefice, who was responsible for her father’s death. 

This time around she corners him in China, with the intention of doing damage to another of his manufacturing interests. 

Then other issues intervene such as a little slave trading, a little drug running, and a little plan to commit genocide. The tale is topical too. Aside from the human trafficking, there is a sideswipe at the trade in endangered species, the commercial friction between China and the West, and even the ongoing aggravation between China and Japan. To say more would be to say too much. 

All in all an enjoyable romp with lots of interesting stuff about China and its way of life that most of us probably never knew. 

In summation, a terrific story...

Monday, 14 December 2015

Lucky Cat


Chapter 7 of Cataclysm is entitled ‘Lucky cat’. There is a reason, and it has nothing to do with the good fortune of Catherine, our avenging Cat in this third adventure in the series..



Fortune cats or lucky cats seem to be commonplace these days and are strongly associated with the Chinese. They even cropped up in an episode of ‘The Apprentice’ on BBC TV last year. These cats were not originally Chinese, however, but Japanese. They call them Maneki Neko, which means ‘beckoning cat’.


Solar-powered lucky cat - Wikipedia commons


The cat has its paw raised as if it’s waving in good fortune for its owners.



You may see them in Chinese restaurants. They are conspicuous in Chinese emporiums here in Spain.



The superstition goes that if the cat is holding up the left paw, this is supposed to attract customers. An ideal for shop or restaurant, I suppose.



If the right paw is lifted, this invites good fortune and money. Then enter the lottery, perhaps?



A wave that doesn’t say ‘goodbye’ but ‘hello, happiness’…



Sometimes you can find a fortune cat with both of its paws in the air; this can also represent protection.



A white cat promises happiness, purity, and positive things to come, while a gold one signifies wealth and prosperity. Black wards off evil spirits, red suggests success in love and relationships and a green cat promises good health for the owner.



You can find out a little more about lucky cats – and Cat’s luck – in Cataclysm.



Cataclysm – most appropriately published tomorrow by Crooked Cat Publishing.



 You can pre-order/order on Amazon from here: http://authl.it/B01953NVY4

Thursday, 19 November 2015

Writing - Catalyst for a series

If we’re to believe the experts, books in series are very popular and ‘sell’. This makes sense. Look at the popular TV and movie series that draw viewers in the millions. The audience – the readers, the viewers – like the familiar world of the characters, even though they still want to be stretched by a constantly moving story with twists and turns.

Writing a series is not easy, and sometimes the original writer might not have even intended to pen a series. There are perhaps two approaches:

1.     A character or set of characters cry out for more treatment, more adventures, so a series is born – perhaps extending from a sequel

2.     The writer plans a situation or a number of plots and creates characters who have the longevity to span more than one novel

I suspect that Bernard Cornwell’s Sharpe didn’t begin as a series, no more than C S Forester’s Hornblower. But their characters demanded more – including books harking back to their past. The back stories of both Hornblower and Sharpe were novels written some time after the first book in the series was published. The Richard Bolitho novels by Alexander Kent (Douglas Reeman) also followed this pattern, written out of chronological sequence. [Interestingly, Reeman’s first book was published in 1958 and his latest was in 2011; he’s now 91].

Unintended series
Usually, these begin with the nagging requirement to write a sequel. Sequels tend to demand to be written because the hero or heroine has unfinished business. In actual fact, the author has invested time and emotion in the character and it is painful to leave that ‘person’ in limbo (even if it was ‘happy ever after’). And of course in the writing of the sequel, more story lines insinuate themselves into the author’s psyche. This kind of series can present the biggest problem for the author, because sometimes the first book has presented a kind of strait-jacket, a constriction that has to be broken to allow for more free rein in the future. That strait-jacket might be a job or a spouse; either of which may have to be jettisoned for the series to continue.

Intentional series
A series can be rewarding not only for the reader, but also for the author. Naturally, to begin with salient points have been mapped in the main character’s life, to progress the series. But it’s the putting on of flesh that makes the project so intriguing. I’m a great believer in planning a book, but within that plan there’s still scope for diversions that might provide material for later adventures. These diversions may be caused by new characters being introduced or by unexpected events precipitated by the plot device.

The planned series begins with a central idea. A mission for the hero or heroine. A goal or a quest. The black magic series Night Hunter by Robert Faulcon (Robert Holdstock) began with black magicians kidnapping the hero’s wife, daughter and son for nefarious purposes, leaving him for dead. He survived and began delving into the supernatural, seeking clues to the whereabouts of his family, his quest sustained for six books (1983-1987). Pick a genre and you’ll find hundreds of series books in that genre: crime, science fiction, fantasy, and horror, for example. You can search for series and get some surprises too.
 
This site is quite interesting. I was surprised at the dominant series titles – but bear in mind that the more books in the series, the more votes/readers that series is likely to get:
http://www.fictfact.com/most-popular-by-genre/cozy

I’m dipping my toe in the series concept with two strands: The Tana Standish Spy Series and the Avenging Cat series.

The ‘Avenging Cat’ begins with:
 
  
Catalyst – which introduces Catherine (‘Cat’) Vibrissae who is on a mission of vengeance against Loup Malefice, CEO and owner of Cerberus, a global company of dubious ethics.

“Yes,” Avril said. “I get a small retainer from one of the anti-pollution groups, DOSE - Defenders of Sacred Earth. Not much. But they want me to continue, just in case anything goes amiss. They keep quoting PCB pollution at me. I point out that the stuff’s banned, but they insist I carry on checking. Distrustful lot…” She shrugged. “But they pay.”

Len tapped his fingers on the desk. “PCBs?”

Polychlorinated Biphenyls,” Cat said. “Highly toxic, used in the manufacturing processes of paints, adhesives, polish, electrical equipment. Firms were pretty cavalier with it…”

Len chortled. “Is this the chemist in you coming out now?”

“You’re a chemist?” Avril said.

“Yes…”

Avril leaned forward, in interrogator’s mode. “But I thought you were a model.”

“I’m both. Modelling pays better – and my hours aren’t so regular.’

Avril narrowed her eyes, faced Len. “Cathy’s right. PCBs were banned in the late 1970s, early 80s.”

“Well,” Len said, “that’s all right, then, surely?”

“No, not really.”

Cat explained, “What Avril means is that PCBs can remain in seawater for a thousand years…”

 
 Catacomb – continues on Cat’s vengeance trail, this time taking her from Nice to Morocco.

That evening, they all sat at a long table, Gerard on her right, Rick on her left. Opposite were Howard and Abdel. The walls of the dining room were adorned with oil paintings, landscapes, views of Tangier, and seascapes, all executed by Gerard. “You’ve captured the light perfectly,” Cat said. “Your style reminds me of the Orientalists.”

            “Why, thank you, my dear. I simply adore Delacroix.” Gerard wore a cravat, a red silk shirt and loose flannel trousers with open-toed sandals. Quite the Bohemian, she thought.

            Glad to be free of trousers and shirt this evening, she’d chosen a simple black dress. But out of respect for Abdel, she’d draped her shoulders with a wispy black lace shawl that covered the enticing generous ‘v’.

            Howard nursed his Volubilia Gris, a white wine he recommended, and stared away into memory. “I remember you wearing that black ensemble, it seemed more like mourning clothes – except for the revealing décolletage, I might add.”

            “And no visible panty line, as I recall,” chimed in Gerard with glee.

            “Because,” Cat replied, “I wasn’t wearing any.”

            Howard guffawed.

            “I’ve been to some of Cathy’s fashion shows,” Rick said. “I’m sure she’d appear elegant even in a bin-liner!”

            She closed her hand over his and squeezed it. “Thank you, kind sir.”

            Gerard chuckled. “I agree. Elegant even in glitzy tat!”

            Howard whooped loudly. “Sheer dress, sheer wantonness!”

            “Remember that wedding dress with the see-through top?” Gerard chortled. “A few eyes popped at that!”

            “I can imagine,” Rick said.

            Shaking his head, Howard moaned. “The new trend seems to be to expose what is usually covered and to cover what used to be exposed. I can’t say I like it much. It loses the allure.”

            Cat smiled at Abdel, who appeared uncomfortable, his face slightly flushed, as if unsure where to rest his gaze. “The pendulum will swing, as it always does. Ignore these critics, Abdel, they’re only baiting me.”

            “I know, Cathy. But it is–”

            “Unseemly,” chimed in Howard. “You’re right. We should behave better with our guests.” He winked at Gerard.

            “Consider us both chastised.” Gerard coyly lowered his lids.

            “Now, tell us,” Howard said, leaning close to her, “why are you really here?”

            “Am I that transparent?”

            “Utterly see-through, my dear.”

            Keeping to only a few details, she explained about Loup Malefice’s machinations and her discovery that he’d had her father killed.

Cataclysmis due out next month and sees Cat in China, determined to confront Malefice once and for all in Shanghai. But complications arise before she can achieve that goal…
 
Madrid
After so long apart, Cat and Rick fell into each other’s arms when they got inside the city apartment. No sooner had the door shut behind them, their cases shoved to one side in the hall, than they began undressing each other on their way to the bedroom.

            Afterwards, as they snuggled close on the bed, she said, “It still hasn’t sunk in. All the money I’ve been bequeathed.”

            “You can do almost anything, go anywhere.”

            “I’m not going anywhere without you, Rick.” She hugged him, kissed him on the lips.

            “You don’t have to continue with your crusade, you know.”

            “I sort of promised. You were there.”

            “Yes, but it can be all done legally – no more abseiling down buildings!”

            “We’ll see – after Shanghai.”

            “All right, I’ll settle for that.”

            “I hope we can get the paperwork sorted and find a seat for you on the plane.”

            “Me too. I hated us being separated. I know it was for a good reason…” His voice choked off.

            “I know, darling. I feel awful.”

            “It’s sad, Cathy. But it also makes you grateful to be alive… You never know how long you’ve got left, do you?”

            “Live for the moment?”

            “Yes.” He kissed her. “Something like that.”

            “I told you about Daddy’s great affection for Marcus Aurelius’ Meditations.”

            “Yes, you did. So?”

            “He wrote, ‘In the life of a man, his time is but a moment, his being an incessant flux, his senses a dim rushlight, his body a prey of worms, his soul an unquiet eddy, his fortune dark, and his fame doubtful’. Long or short, our lives should be lived for the ‘now’, not dwelled upon in the past, nor blindly yearning for an unknowable future.”

            “That’s quite a philosophy. Seize the day?”

            “I’ve seized something, I think…” she purred playfully.

            “Hmm… so you have…”

 
The Tans Standish Spy Series is about Tana, a psychic who works for the British Intelligence Service, and begins with:

 
The Prague Papers – which finds her in Czechoslovakia, 1975, some seven years after her last mission there during the Soviet invasion. This time, she has to identify a traitor and in the process loses some friends.
 
The Tehran Text – takes Tana to Iran in 1978, having recovered from the trauma of the Czechoslovak mission. She needs all her psychic powers and guile to evade the Shah’s secret police, while attempting to preserve the life of friends.

I hope you can join me in these series, and enjoy the ride!
 
If you’re keen on spy fiction series, then drop by here

 
Randall has amassed a phenomenal amount of information – 800+ series comprising some 5800+ books as well as covering 200+ movies and 1200 TV shows).  I’ll be featuring a blog post about Randall soon.

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Writing - Editing tip - Work in progress progresses – 2


Catalyst - #1 in the 'Avenging Cat' series

It’s that time again. My next novel Cataclysm, #3 in the ‘Avenging Cat’ series, is completed, and the self-edit is ongoing, prior to it being vetted by Jennifer, my wife, before being sent to the publisher, Crooked Cat.

Part of that self-edit process involves tackling word-repetitions. Some are word-echoes, repetitions that occur more than once often in the same page, while others are simply examples of lazy writing that needs livening up.

The repetitions I’ve identified by using the Word search are shown below. I’ve started work on these; some have been reduced in number already (see brackets); be wary of replacing one repetition with another, however!

Smiled – 23 (9)

Nodded – 48 (18)

Laughed – 8 (this is good, I made a conscious effort while writing to avoid using this!) (3)

Grinned – 14 – (not bad, either) (6)

Sighed – 4 (again, I was on the look-out for this so they are few) (3)

Looked – 26 (22)

Moment – 37 (11)

Glanced – 40

Few – 40

Down – 58

Up – 145 (horrendous! Search entails a space in front of and after this word)

Out – 142 (same applies as above…)

Back – 72 (ditto)

Just – 36 (I tried to avoid using this word so much, will definitely excise most)

Called – 34

Saw – 19

Walked – 37

Ran – 32

Pointed – 22

Suddenly – 5 (not bad, but probably too many)

Seemed – 49

Felt – 52

Thought – 49

Though – 30 (I've noticed in other books that sometimes this is used when the writer meant 'thought')

Shrugged – 14 (again, while writing I tried to avoid using this, but it can still be reduced)

Stepped – 46 (surprised at this, but this number will get reduced)

Turned – 75 (far too many!)

Shook – 33

What’s the point of all this?  Often, the repeated word (and its associated phrase) is redundant. And tidying up at this stage can improve the narrative flow.
 
The above list shows those words I’m familiar with in the repetition stakes; there may be others, of course, and hopefully they will come to light in the final re-read.