A big thank you to author Nancy Jardine for inviting me on to her blog today for her regular feature Summer Surprise.
https://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/
Nancy is the author of the Celtic Fervour series of historical novels, which I heartily recommend:
https://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/p/nancy-jardines-books.html
She also writes romantic mysteries and time-travel adventures.
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Showing posts with label Nancy Jardine. Show all posts
Wednesday, 7 June 2017
Wednesday, 23 September 2015
Writing - Welcome Wednesday
Every week, multi-genre author Nancy Jardine features a 'Welcome Wednesday' slot in her blog, where she invites guest writers to chat about various writing subjects.
Today, Nancy very kindly invited me, and I'm discussing that perennial subject 'plot versus character'.
http://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/2015/09/welcome-wednesdays-guest-is-nik-morton.html?showComment=1443013172874#c4782221977601192572
Many thanks for the invitation, Nancy!
Today, Nancy very kindly invited me, and I'm discussing that perennial subject 'plot versus character'.
http://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/2015/09/welcome-wednesdays-guest-is-nik-morton.html?showComment=1443013172874#c4782221977601192572
Many thanks for the invitation, Nancy!
Me...
... and Nancy...
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Nancy Jardine
Monday, 31 August 2015
Monday Moments...
Thank you to Nancy Jardine for mentioning my first 'Avenging Cat' novel, Catalyst in her blog -
http://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/2015/08/monday-moments-with-catalyst-by-nik.html?showComment=1441026298373#c6160341460287004027
... and also for reviewing it so favourably.
http://nancyjardine.blogspot.com.es/2015/08/monday-moments-with-catalyst-by-nik.html?showComment=1441026298373#c6160341460287004027
... and also for reviewing it so favourably.
Thursday, 27 August 2015
Writing – supporting characters (2)
In
an earlier blog (here) I
touched upon supporting characters, prompted by a guest post from Nancy Jardine
(here) I
promised to return to the subject.
A few minor characters – essential to keep the story moving – sometimes push themselves into more than one book. Naturally, if you’re writing a series, it’s a good idea to feature regular minor characters; besides offering some familiarity for the reader, they can grow with the main character too. That can be regarded as a given, also, for series characters: they need to develop and change as their story unfolds from book to book, rather than be untouched by preceding often traumatic events.
A few minor characters – essential to keep the story moving – sometimes push themselves into more than one book. Naturally, if you’re writing a series, it’s a good idea to feature regular minor characters; besides offering some familiarity for the reader, they can grow with the main character too. That can be regarded as a given, also, for series characters: they need to develop and change as their story unfolds from book to book, rather than be untouched by preceding often traumatic events.
In
my book Write a Western in 30 Days, I
stated ‘While minor characters don’t need as much description, it’s useful to
give each of them some identifying feature, whether the hair colour or nose
shape. Or a humorous trait. If a barkeep simply serves the drink, don’t dwell
on him too much; if however he has information to divulge to our taciturn
stranger in town, then imbue the barkeep with a little more life.’ (p91).
This
is true for any genre novel. Minor characters are there to add flavour, colour,
texture, realism, even humour, and most importantly to move the story forward.
They are not there simply for padding and inconsequential chat.
When
building up your back-story (which may never see print), there are several
instances where character motivation should be embedded. People generally don’t
do something without a reason. They’re motivated by pride, greed, altruism,
love, anger, jealousy, hate and a lot more besides, much of which is created in
their past.
In
my book The $300 Man, Lydia hates
Mexicans, because her husband found love and solace in a Mexican woman’s arms.
The child of that union was Corbin, the hero – so she doesn’t like him, either
– his mixed race is a constant affront to her. So her past shapes how she feels
towards the Mexican workers at the silver mine in the story. Her past provides
her with powerful motivation for her current actions and intent.
Certainly,
incidents or people in their past might return to haunt them. By building a
past for your characters, they cease to be made of cardboard. Within a short
while, they’ll seem alive. And to a certain extent this applies to minor
characters as well.
Somerset
Maugham has said that every action of a character must be the result of a
definite cause – significantly related to the entire fiction, of course.
Each
motive must be in keeping with the character’s behaviour pattern that you’ve
established. Otherwise, you lose credibility; again, consider applying this to
minor characters.
In
Last Chance Saloon (2008), which
takes place in 1866, Jonas the deputy sheriff is featured; he’s in love with an
older woman, Ruth, a widow; the relationship is not resolved at the end. A year
later, 1867, there’s a passing mention of Jonas and Ruth in Blind Justice at Wedlock (2011), ‘Ruth Monroe
who’d scandalised the town with her new beau, Deputy Johnson, a man some
thirteen years younger than her.’ However, in Old Guns (2012), which mainly takes place in 1892, we see that they
are now happily married and Jonas is the town’s sheriff. Of course, their
descriptions have aged in the intervening quarter-century!
My
main protagonists in Blood of the Dragon
Trees, a modern-day thriller set in Tenerife, are Laura Reid and Andrew
Kirby, aged 25 and 34 respectively; they are fighting the trade in endangered
species, among other things. In Catalyst,
the first in a new crime series, the hero Rick and heroine Cat meet up with a
private eye in Barcelona who is instrumental in helping them obtain incriminating
evidence; the private eye is half-English, half-Spanish, Leon Cazador, whose
cases are told ‘in his own words’ in Spanish
Eye. At the end of Catacomb, the
second in the ‘Avenging Cat’ series, the plot necessitates that the hero Rick
fled with a minor character to Tenerife, leaving behind the heroine Cat in
Morocco. The sequel Cataclysm then
logically begins with a villain from Blood
of the Dragon Trees escaping police custody in Tenerife and doing harm…
which involves Rick and, ultimately, Cat, Laura and Andrew!
These
inter-relationships move the story forward, create additional threat, and
hopefully keep the reader turning the pages wanting to know what will happen to
people they’ve come to know vicariously; I hope too that regular readers will enjoy
meeting some of these characters again. However, it is not essential to
following the novel to have read all of the linked books.
To
a certain extent, these characters elbowed their way into the books I write.
Life is stranger than fiction, so it’s not too outlandish to postulate that
some characters will know each other in different works! Well, that’s my
excuse, anyway.
I’m
not alone in this, of course; plenty of authors return to minor characters in
their books. Perhaps you can think of a few?
***
Blood of the
Dragon Trees - paperback and e-book
Amazon
UK here (it has clocked up 8 good reviews, but for some reason no more than
that, sadly)
Amazon
COM here
Spanish Eye - paperback and e-book
Amazon
UK here
Amazon
COM here
Catalyst - paperback and e-book
Amazon
UK here
Amazon
COM here
Tuesday, 11 August 2015
Blog Guest – Nancy Jardine – Secondary Characters
Today’s blog guest is Nancy Jardine, who has some
interesting points to make with regard to writing about secondary characters in
fiction. She is visiting again as her new book, Take Me Now, has only recently been published (June). The previous
blog is here
So far, I’ve not featured an older man as the main protagonist of any of my novels but Ruaridh would be a good character to feature if I ever wanted to make him a central character— romantic novel or not.
I’ve tried to make him a realistic old Scot, a man of the isles who loves his life at the boatyard on Lanera, a fictitious island off the west coast of Scotland. The weather there isn’t kind for much of the year but it makes for a pragmatic and tough older guy. When I wrote him into the story, I thought carefully about his age and the divorced situation between Ruaridh and Nairn’s mother. I know plenty of women who’d want to swap a windy and rainy Scottish west coast island for the much sunnier and milder climate of Barcelona, though Caitlinn stuck with the marriage till Nairn was of university age. That situation of sticking with trials and tribulations for a long time, I think, goes along with the almost Calvinistic attitude that still prevails in many parts of westernScotland .
Though this blog post is about the characters in Take Me Now, there’s also very likeable old man in Tully, the chief of the Garrigill Celtic Hillfort in my historical romantic adventure The Beltane Choice.
Hmm. Maybe I do need to give the ‘older’ man a role in a future novel?
Do you have any favourite strong secondary characters in a novel you’ve read…or in one that you’ve written?
Nancy is becoming a prolific writer with a varied
stable of books:
The Taexali Game - time travel historical adventure set in Severan Roman Britain AD 210
(Aberdeenshire) for Middle Grade/ YA readers.
Take Me Now - fun contemporary romantic mystery
featuring fabulous worldwide cities.
Monogamy Twist- contemporary romantic mystery set in Yorkshire, England; quirky Dickensian plot.
Topaz Eyes- finalist for The People’s Book
Prize Fiction 2014 – romantic mystery thriller.
Celtic Fervour Series of Historical Romantic Adventures - AD 71-84. Book 1 (The Beltane
Choice), Book 2 (After Whorl: Bran Reborn) & Book 3 (After Whorl: Donning
Double Cloaks); Book 3 ends in Aberdeenshire.
***
Secondary Characters
Hello, Nik. Thank you for inviting me to your blog today! [You're welcome!]
I was once asked how I used secondary characters in my
novels and I didn’t have a ready made answer. Since I’m mostly a ‘pantser’
author, my secondary characters appear as I write the story, some having larger
roles than others depending on why I’m using them in the plot.
I also know some quite astute authors who are ‘plotters’. Those
authors always ensure they plan the ‘arrival’ of a new secondary character with
the view that that person might just be the one to feature in a sequel or
subsequent novel in a series.
One reviewer for Take
Me Now writes that she really adored Ruaridh, Nairn Malcolm’s father.
Review comments like that are always great to read because I loved writing
Ruaridh into the novel. He’s an incredibly likable ‘older’ man and at
fifty-nine, he’s still very attractive to the local ladies. Ruaridh is so
personable that he is, in fact, the creator of some jealousy between Nairn—the
main male character—and Ruaridh. Nairn knows just how popular his father is
with Aela Cameron—the leading female role— and is gutted that she could
possibly favour his father more than him. A read of the story shows just how
possible that scenario can be.
So far, I’ve not featured an older man as the main protagonist of any of my novels but Ruaridh would be a good character to feature if I ever wanted to make him a central character— romantic novel or not.
I’ve tried to make him a realistic old Scot, a man of the isles who loves his life at the boatyard on Lanera, a fictitious island off the west coast of Scotland. The weather there isn’t kind for much of the year but it makes for a pragmatic and tough older guy. When I wrote him into the story, I thought carefully about his age and the divorced situation between Ruaridh and Nairn’s mother. I know plenty of women who’d want to swap a windy and rainy Scottish west coast island for the much sunnier and milder climate of Barcelona, though Caitlinn stuck with the marriage till Nairn was of university age. That situation of sticking with trials and tribulations for a long time, I think, goes along with the almost Calvinistic attitude that still prevails in many parts of western
Would a reviewer write that Caitlinn is a pleasant secondary
character? I don’t believe so but it’s not because she’s a downright nasty
bitch. The reader only learns about Caitlinn in the passing as she’s a very
minor character, yet she does play an important function in eventually
straightening out the jealous tension that exists between Nairn and Ruaridh.
Though this blog post is about the characters in Take Me Now, there’s also very likeable old man in Tully, the chief of the Garrigill Celtic Hillfort in my historical romantic adventure The Beltane Choice.
Hmm. Maybe I do need to give the ‘older’ man a role in a future novel?
Do you have any favourite strong secondary characters in a novel you’ve read…or in one that you’ve written?
***
Thanks, Nancy. I wonder if your question will get any
responses! Indeed, I’ll blog about this aspect myself, I reckon.
***
Find Nancy at the
following places
Facebook LinkedIN About Me
Goodreads
Twitter @nansjar
Google+ (Nancy Jardine) YouTube book trailer
videos Amazon UK author page Rubidium
Time Travel Series on Facebook http://on.fb.me/XeQdkG
Wednesday, 25 March 2015
Blog Guest - Nancy Jardine - and book launch news!
Hello, Nik. I’m totally delighted that you’ve let me come to
share my new launch news with your readers.
Glad to have you visiting, Nancy. I'll hand over to you now.
My other new launch – The Taexali Game, a time travel historical adventure for a middle grade/ YA readership − will be in April 2015. Set in northern Roman Britannia (current Aberdeenshire) in AD 210, my valiant trio – Aran, Brian and Fianna – must work through a set task list, part of which is to help both the ‘baddies’ and the ‘goodies’ in the story. The problem is that there are local Celtic tribespeople who are just as nasty as the invading Roman Emperor Severus and his barbaric son Caracalla. Working out who to trust is a perilous business. Literally sparring with death is a daily occupation back in AD 210, but in The Taexali Game, my teens are up to the challenges facing them!
***
Nancy Jardine lives
in Aberdeenshire , Scotland . She currently shares a
home with her husband, daughter, son-in-law, 3-year-old granddaughter and 1-year-old
grandson. It’ll continue to be a busy household till late summer of 2015 when
the new build home will be completed for the young ‘uns in what was Nancy ’s former back garden.
The loss of that part of the garden won’t be missed, she says, since there
should now be more writing time available this spring and summer! Childminding
is intermittent over the day and any writing time is precious. (If interested
in how a new house is built these days, follow her blog posts named ‘Gonna
build a house’ )
Those who already know me a little will have learned that my
writing spans the fiction sub-genres of historical romantic adventures;
contemporary romantic mysteries; and time travel adventures for a middle
grade/YA market. My next two books to hit the launch pad are from these quite
different styles of writing – though both were delightful to create!
I’m very excited that on the 27th March 2015, Crooked Cat Publishing is re-launching
a new general reading edition of Monogamy Twist, a light-hearted
contemporary romantic mystery. The fabulous quirky new cover, designed by
Laurence Patterson of Crooked Cat, reveals a grand house at the centre of the
story which is a really excellent image since the plot is based around a
Dickensian theme.
Monogamy Twist
Luke Salieri finds he’s been bequeathed a dilapidated mansion
in Yorkshire… but he can only fully inherit after some weird and antiquated
stipulations are fulfilled! He’s never met his benefactress Amelia Greywood;
hasn’t even heard of her, but Luke’s never one to back down from a challenge.
He needs expert help, though, to find out why he was chosen. Rhia Ashton, a
historian and family tree researcher, seems perfect but it turns out that she
has her own ideas of what will make Luke’s strange request worthwhile.
Compromise is the name of the game for Luke… and for Rhia.
It’s probably no surprise that the plot for the novel came
about as a combination of my watching the then current BBC TV Charles Dickens
serial of late 2010 and while I was also embarking on the first forays in
researching my own ancestral background. I found a decided black sheep in one
of my great-grandfathers: and Rhia finds a good few family surprises for Luke in
Monogamy
Twist. Rhia and Luke were lovely characters to invent but some readers
have told me that they love Thor, the Irish wolfhound, even more!
I extend a warm welcome to your readers to join my Facebook
Launch Party for Monogamy Twist on the 27th
March 2015. Quirky goodies can be won. There’ll be music; food; lovely
locations in Yorkshire … Why not pop in and say
hello!
PRE-ORDER AVAILABLE NOW FROM AMAZON:
***
The Taexali GameMy other new launch – The Taexali Game, a time travel historical adventure for a middle grade/ YA readership − will be in April 2015. Set in northern Roman Britannia (current Aberdeenshire) in AD 210, my valiant trio – Aran, Brian and Fianna – must work through a set task list, part of which is to help both the ‘baddies’ and the ‘goodies’ in the story. The problem is that there are local Celtic tribespeople who are just as nasty as the invading Roman Emperor Severus and his barbaric son Caracalla. Working out who to trust is a perilous business. Literally sparring with death is a daily occupation back in AD 210, but in The Taexali Game, my teens are up to the challenges facing them!
Graphic designer Neil Saddler has done a fabulous job of
blending the main elements of the story in the wonderful cover design he’s
created − depicting locally recognised background scenery in Aberdeenshire; the
threat of invasion from the Ancient Roman Legions; and my time trio who are about
to launch themselves into the adventure!
The Taexali Game will be available in both paperback and ebook
formats.
All matters historical
are her passion; ancestry research a lovely time-suck. Nancy regularly blogs and loves to have
guests visit her blog. Facebooking is a habit she’s trying to keep within
reasonable bounds. [Not easy – Nik] Any time left in a day is for leisure
reading and the occasional historical series on TV.
***
Author links:
Twitter @nansjar
Amazon Author page for books and to view book trailer videos:
Novels also available
from Barnes and Noble; W.H. Smith; Waterstones.com; Smashwords; TESCO
Blinkboxbooks; and various other places.
Thank you, Nik, for the opportunity to share my news with
your readers!
Pleasure's all mine, Nancy. I hope you find lots of readers!
Tuesday, 17 February 2015
Interview with author Nancy Jardine on her blog today
Author Nancy Jardine, who writes historical and contemporary novels, has kindly interviewed me on her blog today.
The interview can be read Here
Thank you, Nancy!
Nancy's e-books can be found on Amazon COM here
and her paperbacks on Amazon COM here
and both types on Amazon UK here
The interview can be read Here
Thank you, Nancy!
Nancy's e-books can be found on Amazon COM here
and her paperbacks on Amazon COM here
and both types on Amazon UK here
all published by Crooked Cat Publishing
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Thursday, 20 February 2014
Book Review - The Beltane Choice
I’ve had a fascination for the period when the Britons
were fighting the Romans since my school days. I enjoyed the adventures of Wulf
the Briton – as can be seen here.
Now, The Beltane Choice, the first in the Celtic Fervour series, published by Crooked Cat, has reignited my interest after all the intervening years.
The story is told from the point of view of Nara,
eldest child of Callan, Chief of Tarras, a warrior princess of the Selgovae,
and Lorcan, an enemy Brigante prince.
As this is an historical romance, when the two main
characters meet up, the sparks fly, as you’d expect from strong personalities. The
book is a pleasure to read, for Nancy Jardine is in full control of her
characters throughout. Her descriptions are visual and sensual, leaving just
enough to the imagination. For example: Their heated kiss outside had stirred
his blood, his want of her remaining strained against his braccae…
When the time of the Beltane rites arrived, Nara
needed to have chosen a lover, which posed a problem, since none of the men in
her village appealed to her. Still, that decision seemed to have been snatched
away from her when she became a captive of …, who noticed that: Her breathing
almost normal, his captive’s head rose to look up at him. Her stare softened – no
more than a blink – but it was filled with some reasoning he could not quite
interpret. Exactly what she thought, he did not know, but found he liked that
new regard, liked it much better than spitting ire at him as an angry cat.
I like her writing style very much. We seem to be
there, with her characters, as the description is so vivid: The track snaked
across the ridges of the highest hills, the going more difficult above the tree
line where the barren terrain lay open to the sky god, Taranis. Random lumps of
greywacks littered the surface… The research is never too heavy or intrusive;
just right. …The sun, now breaking through the clouds, made the recent downpour
sparkle on the verdant green below, the heathers above the tree line a
contrasting vibrant purple. The varying browns of the roundhouse wattles and
thatched roofs contrasted with the grey-white smoke gently drifting upwards.
The contrast between her own father and Lorcan’s
father, Tully, is strong, and telling. While Callan, her father, seems to hate
her, Tully sees so much to praise in her: “Your heart is large, and you shield
your pain well. I say now, that warrior’s mark you wear was well worth the
branding, for you have more courage in you than many a man I have come across.
And they generally do not have your compassion.”
Like all good romances, there has to be conflict,
not only with the ubiquitous Roman cohorts, but also with fellow Britons.
Nara’s road to love is a rocky one, strewn with tears and disappointment. But
she’s strong, believing that ‘Work is an answer to a bleeding heart…’
Perhaps the fighting scenes could have been more
graphic, but then again this is a romance; indeed, the restraint may garner
more readers. I for one was captivated by Nara and have already purchased the
sequel, After Whorl: Bran Reborn.
A shorter version of this review will appear on
Amazon etc.
Labels:
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Britons,
Howard Fast,
Nancy Jardine,
Pauline Gedge,
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The Beltane Choice,
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