MASTER
LISTS FOR WRITERS
Bryn
Donovan (2015)
Whether
a writer is attempting to tackle her first novel or his twenty-fifth, they
should be keen on making the work as readable as possible – and that means
injecting variety, meeting intriguing characters, travelling to exotic worlds,
revealing universal truths, creating visual descriptions that enter the reader’s
mind’s eye, to name a few goals in the quest for enjoyment.
Striving
to write elegant prose, captivating stories that entertain and perhaps educate
a little is no easy feat, so it’s always helpful to obtain guidance whenever it’s
available. There are a good number of books that guide writers – some specific
about character emotions, plot or a particular genre (see my own Write a Western in 30 Days). There are
several offering lists for the writer – and these have their place too, as
tools.
This
book falls into that last category.
Bryn
Donovan has worked hard to provide a fascinating and useful compendium of
words, phrases, and triggers to help the writer. It may not make the actual graft
easier, but if used sensibly, this book can improve that work immensely. I don’t
regard these lists as ‘cheat sheets’ because you still have to put in the
effort, to create the plot, define the characters and to imagine their fictional
world.
What’s
on offer, then?
The
section on descriptions of facial expressions is useful, because it’s so easy
to fall back on ‘he smiled’ or ‘she grinned’. The human face is capable of
manifold aspects, some quite subtle; choose the most apt for the scene or
emotion. Body language speaks to us with
subtlety too, and yet as writers we tend not to employ the richness that is
visible to the discerning eye – again, conveying a character’s mood. Naturally,
we have the usual eye, complexion, face, body, mouth, hair and body
descriptions – try to vary the characters in the story so they’re not all
similar.
One
section of particular interest is that concerning ‘evocative images’ – a single
feather or a rainbow in an oil slick can provide a telling image in a scene,
put the reader there in the character’s point of view. Other lists provide
sounds and scents for settings – again, putting the reader in the story.
There
are lists for plotting: romance, high-stakes, twists, humour, motives for
murder etc. I’ve got more than enough plots going on for my various projects, I
must admit, though it’s conceivable that some of the suggested plots could be
opted for a short story or three.
Dialogue
can be a trial for some writers. Make it real without being boring or slowing
down the story. Here we have lists showing how people say ‘no’, ‘yes’ or ‘verbalize
positive (or negative) feelings’ and so on.
There’s
a good selection of character names and character traits, too.
The
book ends with an important list: ‘10 reasons why you should write that story’.
I endorse all ten and particularly commend #7: Because it doesn’t have to be
perfect. Whatever your hang ups, get the story written. ‘It’s the final draft
that counts.’ And this book will help you polish your novel to get there.
Recommended.
Her
website is www.BrynDonovan.com
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