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Wednesday, 12 August 2015

Writing - Supporting characters (1)

While main protagonists are essential for a good novel, very few books can survive without supporting characters – those secondary individuals who pop in and out of the story. In most cases they’re necessary to help move the story forward. For a beginning writer, they can be used to slow down the action, create interaction that does not move the story forward. So these pesky characters have to be watched carefully.

Any given hero or heroine needs a sounding board, and that’s the secondary character. Otherwise, there’s a risk of little dialogue and worse, the main protagonist may end up either talking to himself or thinking instead of doing.

But how many subsidiary characters can you use?

That depends on the work. A fast-paced thriller will require few, while an epic fantasy may depend on many.

As a rule of thumb, a standard-length book might have six prominent named characters; there will be others, but they tend to pass through, perhaps never to be seen again. A long while back, I recall reading that our memories are most comfortable with remembering lists or items up to six in number.

There’s no hard-and-fast rule about this. If each character is memorable in some way, then the problem won’t arise.

Additionally, we don’t want character names sounding similar or even beginning with the same letter; avoid reader confusion wherever possible.

Your subsidiary characters can crop up for a variety of reasons, so long as they serve the plot.

For my ‘Avenging Cat’ crime series, there are the continuous characters, Catherine Vibrissae, Rick Barnes, the two dogs of law, DI Alan Pointer and DS Carol Basset, and the villains Loup Malefice and Emilio Zabala.

In Catalyst (#1 in the series) we also meet the private eye Avril Bradbury, head of Bradbury & Hood private investigation agency, est. 1896. Though Avril won’t necessarily figure in future books, I am planning a series of Victorian crime stories about the setting up of that agency, featuring Avril’s ancestors! Other characters are required from time to time to help our heroes. In Catalyst, Rick’s contact Leon Cazador proves useful when they go to Barcelona. Cazador is the half-Spanish half-English private eye featured in Spanish Eye, 22 cases ‘in his own words’.

In Catacomb (#2, to be published by Crooked Cat in October), we meet Chuck Marston, a retired safe-cracker and jewel thief, aged 62, who tutors Cat in his techniques. In the same book, we also meet Detective Latifa Badouri of Morocco’s Sûreté nationale – and when I finished I felt that I’d like to meet her again, and maybe I shall... (#3, Cataclysm is due out in December).

For my Tana Standish psychic spy series (set in the 1970s/1980s, beginning with The Prague Papers), again there are continuous characters, namely Tana herself, fellow agents Alex Tyson, Alan Swann and Mike Clayton, their boss Sir Gerald Hazzard, the British SIS psychologist, James Fisk, the thoroughly unpleasant Professor Dmitri Bublyk and his two psychic stars, Karel Yakunin and Raisa Savitsky. There is conflict between some of these people, and each has a purpose in moving the story forward. Besides these, there are 36 other named characters in The Tehran Text (#2 in the series). Even minor individuals deserve to have a name, providing they have a speaking part, of course! (#3, The Khyber Chronicle will be due early 2016).

My co-written work in progress, To Be King, the fantasy sequel to Wings of the Overlord (#1 in the Chronicles of Floreskand), currently has around 70 named characters – so far! This is a fantasy epic, however, and many individuals will be sustained over a half-dozen books.

There’s a full chapter dedicated to character creation in my book Write a Western in 30 Days (Chapter 8, p87) and it covers minor characters too, even tackling their description and names (and is not solely geared to the western genre).

I’ll return to this subject in another blog to discuss a handful of supporting characters who decided – nay, insisted – they wanted more than a small walk-on part and intruded on another character’s series of books...!

Catalyst – paperback & also currently a bargain e-book (till 27 August)
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Spanish Eye – paperback & also currently a bargain e-book (till 27 August)

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The Prague Papers - currently a bargain e-book (till 27 August)

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The Tehran Text - currently a bargain e-book (till 27 August)
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Wings of the Overlord – hardback, (paperback due in December)
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Write a Western in 30 Days – paperback and e-book

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Saturday, 8 August 2015

Summer sale - e-books galore

For a long time I’ve been posting my published short stories here on Saturdays. There are a few left that are much longer than the norm, so I’ve hitherto excluded them to date.

Please feel free to search the blog for ‘Saturday Story’ and you will have plenty to read.

In the meantime, why not take advantage of a number of great reads from my publisher Crooked Cat.

They’re putting most of their e-book versions on sale from today.

Including my books, one of them being the collection of short stories about Leon Cazador, half-Spanish half-English private eye, Spanish Eye.

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