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Thursday, 30 October 2025

THE HERRENHAUS FORFEIT - Book review

 


Paul Phillips’s second book in the ‘Chasing Mercury’ series, The Herrenhaus Forfeit was published in 2024 and continues the story begun in The Borodino Sacrifice. Certainly, the books can be read independently, though it’s preferable they’re read in sequence.

Former US Army sniper Sam Bradley is being recruited by the shadowy character Doyle to chase down the Mercury outfit headed by Mila to discover what they were seeking. ‘Bradley’s sense of nausea increased. It was the motion sickness you got from the long, inescapable slide to inevitability... The thing about the long slide, the thing that let you cope with the dread of its inescapable outcome, was that wrapped up in the motion sickness was something else. Exhilaration’ (pp36/37).

Again, we tour the detritus of post-war Germany as we follow Bradley who has infiltrated a gangster group involved in smuggling whatever brought profit in the black market, while also dodging Nazis and Soviets. ‘There had been a serious lack of accommodation in Hamburg since the night the world had learned a new term: firestorm’ (p88).

As before there are many instances where Phillips conveys a scene with a minimum of description:

‘... a heavy vehicle had recently ploughed the neglected crust of mouldered mud and frozen leaves’ (p116).

The plot is convoluted, involving competing groups in a maelstrom of geo-political upheaval. There are double-crosses, betrayals and heroism, and death stalks nearby most of the time. Friendships are forged as are identity papers. There’s a sly name-change from Pfeffer to Salzen and a couple of fascinating character descriptions of middle-aged Marjorie Jessop and conniving Jack Penny. It’s not without humour; for example, when Bradley attempts to help some associates pretend to be Americans, ‘Most importantly, he handed out the Wrigley’s.’ (p159).

The blurb – and the previous book – indicate that Mila is searching for a lost child, which is not easy considering the mortality of children in the war-torn continent. ‘Before adoption, all Aryanised children were renamed, to bury their old identities, and welcome them as lifelong members of the race’ (p126). Though slight of stature, Mila is tough and determined – an irresistible force (p180).

Without telegraphing any spoilers, the forfeit of the title is referred to on p139 – it’s a kind of deal between Mila and some gangsters, where neither party actually trusts the other.

I felt the involvement of the criminal underground was inspired and realistic, the kind of thing that Len Deighton would have attempted. A number of chapter-endings reminded me of Adam Hall’s Quiller books where the protagonist would face a serious predicament at the end of a chapter and then in the next chapter he/she is Scott-free and the reasons are divulged after the event; it works well.

Mila and Sam are a great team.

Needless to say, in due course I shall be reading the third book in the trilogy, The Safehaven Complex.

Editorial comment for the benefit of writers:

‘... bring the leather doctor’s bag...’ (p95). This should read ‘bring the doctor’s leather bag’ or ‘bring the leather doctor’s-bag’ to avoid the perception that the doctor was made of leather.

‘She hissed “Now!”’(p174)  – there’s no susurration here, which is necessary for a hiss. Maybe whispered harshly or grated would be better?


Tuesday, 9 May 2023

ABSOLUTE HONOUR - Book review

 


C.C. Humphries’ third Jack Absolute novel, Absolute Honour, was published as a hardback and a paperback in 2006. To date, sadly, it is the last book of his adventures.

It’s April 1761 and Jack is in Rhode Island, about to board ship for England. He is instrumental in rescuing an Irish Grenadier, Red Hugh McClune from a mob, saving his life. Hugh is a rumbustious fellow, larger than life and seems a firm friend.  The voyage is not uneventful, whether its mutiny and attacks by the French to enliven their days.

Finally, ending up in Bath, Jack is smitten by Hugh’s beautiful cousin, Laetitia. Complications arise, however, part farce, part suspense, that get in the way of true love. In due course Jack finds himself employed as a spy in Rome, to infiltrate the Jacobites living and plotting there. But it doesn’t end here, for he is soon fighting the Spanish in the storming of Valencia de Alcántara…

There’s plenty of sailing ship lore, sword-fights, footpads, ambushes and betrayal to keep the pages turning. Readers of C.S. Forester and Bernard Cornwell will certainly appreciate these books.

A triumph and a worthy successor to Jack’s previous two outings.


See also WRITEALOT: THE BLOODING OF JACK ABSOLUTE - Book review (nik-writealot.blogspot.com)

and:

WRITEALOT: FFB - Jack Absolute - a new historical hero (nik-writealot.blogspot.com)

Friday, 18 November 2022

THE KEYS OF HELL - Book review

 

This Jack Higgins novel was first published in 1965. However, in 2001 Higgins revisited the book (which had long been out of print) and tacked book-end chapters, the first and last taking place in Manhattan, 1995. The rest of the book is shown as occurring in 1965, which he also revised, though it could have been improved more, I feel.

It’s Higgins’s third novel featuring his ‘super-spy’ Paul Chavasse, following from The Testament of Caspar Schultz (1961) and Year of the Tiger (1963).

Only recently returned from a hair-raising adventure in Albania, Paul is meeting his boss, The Chief of the Bureau, in the embassy in Rome. Though due for leave, Paul is tasked with going back into Albania and assassinating a double agent, Noci.

Shortly after disposing of Noci, he saves an attractive woman who is being assaulted in the street. It’s Francesca Minetti – he met her at the embassy. She’s Italian-Albanian and works for the Bureau. She has a private problem – her village’s Black Madonna was spirited away before the secret police could steal it. Unfortunately, it sank with her brother and his boat in the marshes and she barely escaped. Would he help her retrieve the statue? It is a symbol of faith against the repressive Communist regime.

He can’t resist the offer.

Higgins paints an interesting picture of the politics of the period, and the search amidst the marshes is masterfully evoked. Inevitably, there is betrayal, courage, capture and escape, the pace rarely letting up.

The tacked-on end chapter works well, too – cleverly done.

I could not find any reference to the keys of Hell in the text; there is a quotation at the front, an Arabic proverb: There are no keys to Hell –the doors are open to all men.

If I had one issue: I lost count of the number of times Paul – and others – lit cigarettes; a veritable commercial for tobacco or a lazy method of breaking up speech or having the protagonist just do something.

A fast read.

Here's a review of the first Paul Chavasse book:

http://nik-writealot.blogspot.com/2015/04/ffb-testament-of-caspar-schultz.html

Here are some thoughts on Jack Higgins, with a quotation from his final Chavasse book:

http://nik-writealot.blogspot.com/2010/12/editors-pet-peaves-01-whats-empty.html

 

Sunday, 12 June 2022

THE LAST ONE LEFT - book review


It’s a long time since I read a John D. MacDonald novel. This one was first published in 1967; my edition is the 2014 Random House copy, recently purchased. Amusingly, MacDonald dedicated the novel ‘to Travis McGee who lent invaluable support and encouragement’.

It begins and also ends with the boating couple Howard and June Prowt off the Gold Coast off Florida. Anyone who has read MacDonald will be familiar with his knowledge of sailing craft, which shows in his description of both the vessel and the state of the sea. They thought they saw a boat adrift but were unable to go alongside and then it was gone.

Staniker has survived an explosion at sea; he’d been hired to captain the boat for the Kayd family. He’s the last one left, the rest of the passengers have perished. He is being nursed back to health.

Sam Boylston, a Texas lawyer, is mourning the death of his sister Leila – she was one of the passengers on the Kayd vessel.  Leila’s husband Jonathan was convinced she was alive and planned a hair-brained search for her in the vast ocean.

Chrissie Harkinson is pleased to bed the young boat boy Oliver for she has a use for him. She also knows Staniker so naturally she visits him, just to see how he’s doing…

And so begins a convoluted but easy to follow plot that is pure MacDonald. His descriptions of characters, minor and major, and the locales are spot on, as ever. Oh, yes, indeed, there’s certainly something not right. There’s the question of a considerable amount of cash involved which might be missing… There’s also a beautiful Cuban maid with an interesting back-story, and she is involved with Raoul Kelly, an investigative reporter.

The characters are set up, the plot is unfolding and it all falls into place. And as you’d expect with one of John D.’s mystery thrillers there are murders and betrayals.

Loved it. Good to reacquaint myself with you, John D. You might have died in 1986, aged seventy, but you still excite your readers three decades later.

Saturday, 24 January 2015

Saturday Story - 'The Merger'


THE MERGER
 
Nik Morton

 

James Grenfell turned an incredulous face to his secretary as he lowered his wiry frame into the swivel chair. ‘You mean Bert Haynes got the job, Ann?’

She nodded, tentatively placing the day’s mail before him. ‘Yes, sir. It was announced while you were attending the Trade Fair.’

A coldness seemed to seep into every fibre of his body. He’d thought he was the obvious choice for their Swiss branch’s new manager.

As the hard facts of Haynes’ good fortune sank home he found himself berating Ann repeatedly, grudging every second working for the firm that had treacherously spurned him.

Instead of detailing Ann to take his dictation down to the typing pool, he carried the material himself. He had to get away from the stifling confines of his office.

After eleven years – not good enough! It burned him up inside. Loyalty seemed to mean nothing nowadays. Barging into the typing pool, he halted in his tracks. ‘Do you reckon this merger’ll affect us, Deidre?’

‘The job’ll be the same.’

Tensely gripping his letters, he turned on his heels and hurried back down the corridor.

So they’re planning a merger. And he’d never been informed. They didn’t trust him any more!

As he stormed blindly into his office, an idea slowly materialised and moulded itself. Trusted or not, he still had access to the latest and most up-to-date trade secrets. He smiled sanguinely.

At the moment Ann dashed out for her tea-break, he telephoned Sebastian Lecroix in Paris.

‘Surprised to hear from me, eh?’ He chuckled archly. ‘Yes, I know this is quite irregular, calling our biggest rival’s head of personnel.’ He cleared his throat nervously. ‘I have a proposition…’

***

‘What’s this?’ Cornish queried, his stout arms akimbo. He looked every inch a managing director, with his mottled cheeks, glistening blue eyes and contented paunch. ‘Working late again, James?’

Casting startled grey eyes upward, James stammered, ‘Yes… just… checking the system.’

Before him lay a mountain of duplicated files and photocopied material amassed during his overtime. He broke out into a cold sweat, fearing Cornish would notice them.

‘Every night this week you’ve been working late, James. Don’t overdo it, now.’ Cornish beamed unctuously. ‘You’re too valuable to us, to go collapsing with over-work, eh?’ He chuckled and slipped out of the door.

James’ trembling fingers gathered the various dockets together. God, he’d never make a crook! Still, he now had a comprehensive breakdown of the whole business, inside and out.

***

‘Good morning, sir!’

He returned Ann’s greeting cheerfully enough and dumped his heavy suitcase beside her desk. ‘I’ll be going to Paris this evening, Ann. The Lacelles contract,’ he lied, patting the case.

‘It’s ready?’

‘Finally, yes.’ He wavered a moment. ‘Oh, I’ve reserved a berth on the ferry.’

For the remainder of the morning he couldn’t concentrate on any work. ‘Why bother?’ he mused. He’d soon be handing over his valuable secrets. Should net a few thousand – and a good job. A position of trust. That’s all he wanted.

‘I’m off to dinner now, Mr Grenfell,’ Ann informed him over the intercom.

‘Right-ho, Ann.’ Time to act! Calmly bringing the suitcase into his office, he smiled to himself. Everything running smoothly.

Heaving the case on to his desk he opened it and emptied the load of books. Swiftly unlocking the safe, he dumped the duplicate files and accounts inside the case and returned it to Ann’s office.

‘This calls for a drink.’ He sighed with heartfelt relief.

His heart was beating apprehensively as he walked through the building. Carrying the suitcase, he felt conspicuous. And yet nobody seemed to pay him undue attention. He was actually getting away with it!

Nearly out in the clear, he realised excitedly, his pace quickening as he caught sight of the double doors and the waiting taxi outside.

‘James!’

Heart pounding expectantly, he faltered on the threshold. Should he hurry on, pretend he hadn’t heard? Too late! He winced as Cornish grabbed his free arm.

‘Your secretary tells me you’re off to Paris.’
 
Pivoting round to face him, James replied equably, ‘Yes, a contract from Lacelles.’

Then, a tincture of bravado crept into his manner. Forcing a lean smile, he joked, ‘I’ll have to speak to Ann, I think. Can’t have her discussing my business, you know.’
 
Cornish’s laugh rumbled from his barrel of a chest. ‘Not her fault, James.’ He jovially placed aa heavy fat hand on James’ shoulder. ‘I told her I had to see you urgently.’

His mouth dropped open. ‘Urgent?’ Forebodings filled him. Glancing at his watch, he mumbled, ‘I’ll be late.’
 
‘A moment, James.’
 
Cold fear struck him to the core.
 
‘Since you’re away tonight, I thought I’d tell you.’ His chubby cheeks glistened as a massive smile creased his face. ‘We’re planning a merger with our rivals and their personnel chap, Lecroix, has insisted you lead the new amalgamated team.’
 
James was stunned. Head swimming, he queried in a subdued tone, ‘When did you speak to Lecroix?’
 
Cornish dimpled his shining brow in thought. ‘About two weeks ago. He’s due over here this evening to negotiate the merger’s final draft.’ He grinned. ‘He’ll be sorry you’re not here, James.’

‘So will I,’ James said feelingly, and added flatly, ‘Well, must go.’
 
Certainly, Lecroix had wanted him. Insisted, even. But that was before he’d phoned with his clever proposition.
 
Dusk was settling across the Channel when he strolled to the ferry’s guardrails and ditched the incriminating suitcase over the side.  As it swiftly sank in the phosphorescent wake an emptiness pervaded him. Getting rid of the material was pointless.
 
Already, Lecroix would be telling Cornish about his proposed betrayal.

***


Previously published in Parade, February 1972, under my penname Platen Syder.

Copyright Nik Morton, 2014.

 
Naturally, looking back over this now, some 42 years later, I would like to think it could be improved. A certain magazine style was considered necessary to tell a tale in 1,000 words, so genre fiction short-hand prevailed in the writing. Still, I feel it holds up as a story.

If you enjoyed this moral tale, then you might like my collection Spanish Eye, published by Crooked Cat Publishing, featuring Leon Cazador, private eye in 22 cases.